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Hi. There are some creative ideas, emotional impact, Good soothing and structure, over all good imagery. Just work on your rhyming scheme a little, i think if this was me i will either rhyme line after line,or i will try to have more variation. Other than that i like your poems, it also brought me back to my child hood age back home in Panama, thanks for the good memories. TC